Did you click at her after finished 2 activities? i think that should give you an option to choose telling her to quote. I hope this works (because i don’t want to fix the code again haha😅)
Yes! tbf a whole concept has somewhat inspired by tmc aesthetic but i draw without looking at the reference too much to avoid making the sprites too similar with it.
We need more from you honestly, the fact you made a pretty expansive ending game with pretty art and funny jokes in only a week shows a lot of promise!! Id love to see what you could do in a month or a year of work :)
also thank you for making a game for my (our) type, I am satiated
I just created an account to tell you how much I love this game and wish there was more. You have a huge potential. This might be the first game I donated to on this site. It's not much but it's enough for a motivational drink :)
I aware of “all tomorrow” and i think it affected how I write this story in subconsciousness. So it’s not a direct reference but rather an indirect inspiration.
This is my first visual novel , I usually play horror ( 3d games ) , this my first visual novel at start I didn't get it , but when I start to try impress her more and more , I really started to enjoy this. Ur story making is great, how cute she is , really great game , waiting for other game , and can u explain bit Abt worst where scientist are there are any connections between them or it's just a normal ending , whatever thank u very much for publishing this game , fan from Sri Lanka .
I’m glad that this is your first experience and you didn’t disappoint about it! If possible I’ll try to make 3d horror games too so I hope you will try it when it releases!
I absolutely love Mrs's character design, and the overall atmosphere the art-style provides. For a visual novel made only in 7 days, the design is clearly distinguished and is its greatest aspect! I really liked how familiar yet suffocating the room felt thanks to the room design, colour choice and lighting. Not to mention how it makes the "Elephant in the room" pop out more due to her contrasting colours and sharper design, yet she fits in perfectly due to the excellent implementation of lighting. She truly feels like an intruder invading a safe space since she's far more detailed and imposing compared to the rest of the room (as we tend to focus more on what's new in a familiar place, it's a great way to convey our focus by giving the object of interest a greater clarity compared to the rest) A stroke of genius for the small amount of time you had to make the game.
Exploring for the endings, though woefully short, was pretty humorous, and getting to know the characters was interesting enough to keep me engaged. My biggest regret is that we don't get to spend enough time with them due to the game's overall length But it clearly shows that the writer has the potential to engage the reader enough through more than the visuals alone, and I would personally love to see them give it another shot through, maybe , a lengthier game? A sequel perhaps?
I can appreciate the clarity the game provides through the objective presented to us by the "Interest Meter", it can most certainly help readers who are stuck exploring for more endings get a clearer picture of what they're doing wrong / not enough to unlock more dialogue as well as the hints given to us through the gallery and other scenarios. However, I'd personally forgo the meter all the while keeping the hints. There's this underlying sense of Danger ever present in the game, it really adds more to the pressure of wanting to stay alive all the while keeping Mrs entertained and therefore interact with her more before a game over. However, through the Interest Meter, the sense of "Did I say the right thing? Am I doing something wrong?" sort of dissipates since the bar becomes a clear indicator of whether or not you're winning her over, which Also devaluates the written dialogue since you know you did something right/wrong before Mrs says anything.
I can tell you wrote Mrs to be a tease at times, making you feel like you chose the wrong option only to syke you out (which is endearing I love it) but the meter already tells you the results. Though on the other hand, as you play the game more and you see that the interest bar is not quite where you want it to be by the end of the game, it also gives the player that pressuring feeling, maybe frustration that the reader is missing something. Whether that's good or not is left to the reader's interpretation.
From my personal experience, I just so happen to stumble into the "best ending" on my first try and I noticed that you expected the player to go through other options First before discovering it, through the writing. Be wary of what the player/reader can experience before writing ahead, the majority of people might play through the motions that you layed out first, but some jokes may fall flat for those who don't.
I personally liked Ending 3 since it gives plenty of room for a sequel and therefore another shot at character expansion or even development. Not to mention it felt like a more natural way to end the interaction between the characters without having to rush things.
8/10 Visual Novel considering the time limit imposed. I would love to see what you're capable of with more time to cook.
Thank for writing an honest and thoughtful review for my game! I’m glad you like it and think highly for this game. For “interested meter”, I’m not sure either I should keep it or get rid of it next game. I added this feature after many players complained about how hard the game felt at that time so I add it. I’ve already aware that it could spoil the surprise but I can’t think of any better idea for this. After that, I added ending gallery so I’m not sure if interested meter still needs. Maybe I’ll make it so players can toggle it on and off.
Excellent idea, giving the player the Option at a helping hand is a great compromise for those who want it and those who don't need it.
I believe the hints given in the gallery as well as the game-overs are plenty to guide the player into exploring the game without any hand-holding. After-all , this Visual Novel is a Survival Dating game, so death while attempting to rizz up the lady should be expected. Failing while getting to know the character is part of the experience.
Thank you for taking feedback into consideration as you have so far, I can see that you clearly care about your work and are connected to the community you're gathering.
I hope my lengthy reviews aren't too much of a bother to read, I can see plenty of potential out of you and your work thanks to a clearly displayed passion and willingness to experiment. After-all, you say you're more comfortable at drawing than coding or writing, yet you stepped out of that comfort zone so you could bring more Life into your character, and I believe it's paying off.
I will most definitely be around to see your growth in the future and I can't wait to see you evolve as you make more games and write more stories!
BRUH why is she so thicc lol! this was the last game i played in my 3ScaryGames valentines day special i just uploaded. it was the BEST GAME i played in there and probably should've made it first. it was very creepy but she keeps you interested haha! well done!
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Second Part out now. A few more to go as I wanna get all the endings
Now how in the mother of hell do i get 7. I try to avoid the silly and the pointy, BUT I CANT LEAVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Thank you! i’m glad you liked the game! but i think you played the original version instead of the updated one😅
Ahhh man! It’s still very much a good game! I gotta check out the updated version. My bad chief. 💀
one of my favorite games on itch io
10/10
Thank you! hmm? you look familiar 🤨
mmmmmmhhhh I think so,,,,
Is it really you Mrs.?
Of course, my dear..
She opened her coat and showed me something sus.... Overall 10/10, keep up the good work!
Ahem.. it’s my duty to please my audience 🫡
Lol still great game and of course 10/10.
Thank you for creating this love Mrs design especially. I only wished that I found this sooner. :D
haha thanks! also you did not find her, she found you 🧿🧿🧿
no hentai scenes in the game at all?(
Sadly no😔
Can you add them :))
nope😐
это шедевр
Надеюсь перевод нормальный?
thank you! also i have to thank zogar wholeheartedly for russian translation🙏
เกมดีครับ
ขอบคุณครับบ🙏💗
what if instead of the mandela catalogue it was called the freak catalogue and they got freaky in it
LMAOOO
I cant get the ending 3 no matter what
what happens is it doesnt let me mention her parents and I instantly get ending 7's last dialouge and then ending 7's cutscene.
I am playing on android could it be a bug?
If I am doing something wrong can you please just tell me what to do or give me more throughly hints🥺
Did you click at her after finished 2 activities? i think that should give you an option to choose telling her to quote. I hope this works (because i don’t want to fix the code again haha😅)
What kind of coat does Mrs. wear? I want to have one just like it.
Its probably a very long trench coat
it’s just a long trench coat with my imagination so sadly it’s not real 😅
is one of her sprites inspired by alternates from TMC??
Yes! tbf a whole concept has somewhat inspired by tmc aesthetic but i draw without looking at the reference too much to avoid making the sprites too similar with it.
We need more from you honestly, the fact you made a pretty expansive ending game with pretty art and funny jokes in only a week shows a lot of promise!! Id love to see what you could do in a month or a year of work :)
also thank you for making a game for my (our) type, I am satiated
I’m not sure if it could be any better, but I’’ll do my best to make my next project even better! Thanks for playing and for all the compliments!💖
This game is awesome! The mc was right. I am VERY jealous T_T
MC always knows what they are doing 👀 jokes aside, thank for playing!
absolutely goated game, this happened to me btw
Thank! I’m happy to hear that! (I hope you’re still intact after the encounter tho💀)
I had fun with this May go and make a second video for a all 7 endings
I think you played the wrong version but besides that thanks for playing!
if I did I need to play the right version. it's whatever I downloaded today lol.
yea i had the 1.6 old version Im doing a second Vid of it so next vid will be on 2.7
sorry for the confusion! Now I put the older version below so no one gonna have this same problem.
I really like the art and comedy. Always nice to see more artist get into Ren'py
Happy to hear that! Ren’py is such a blessing for artists who wanna start making games like me.
Add a gallery and also great game
Thx! Also I’ve already add ending galleries if you didn’t know.🫡
I truly like this game but i have skill issue and i didnt get the best final wich is the only one that i missed
Did you get it yet? I hope you’ll find it soon!🙏
I just created an account to tell you how much I love this game and wish there was more. You have a huge potential.
This might be the first game I donated to on this site. It's not much but it's enough for a motivational drink :)
Just playing and enjoying the game is enough to make me happy. Thank you so much for the donation—I really appreciate it!💖💖
Good game. Would you like to translate the game into Spanish? i can help
if you still interested in translating, you can contact me through twitter! Thx in advance 🙏🙏
why is she so packed
i mean.. why not? xD
why not is the real question👀
I would love to play this, absolutely love horror dating sims, but I only play on Android atm, don't know how well this will work on Android
Sounds like you should get a computer then.
download an emulator, Joiplay should work.
Who did I make the android version for?
I saw the android version after I commented sorry
I played it
It's nice, to interact with things is a bit uncomfortable but that's me fat fingering
Great little story so far
I do think this game deserves a "2" in the title
Like “H2DE”?🤔
H2DE2
I wonder what an Eldritch Entity does with their free time.
Maybe she would do some kind of incomprehensible activity I guess 🤔
I found this while browsing itch.io at 10 PM. Reasonable time to play horror, right?
If you okay with sleeping after midnight then sure!👍
waow.....
This was a fun one for sure, the gal is interesting...which is something a lot of these games fail at!
Great Job, have a video!
Glad to hear that you liked “Mrs.”!
(Spoiler warning)
I noticed the IHNM reference and loved it, but is the ending where you get turned into a block of flesh an All Tommorows reference?
I aware of “all tomorrow” and i think it affected how I write this story in subconsciousness. So it’s not a direct reference but rather an indirect inspiration.
Cool. I recommend you read it, it’s a very good read and really makes you think about human behaviour and our history of warfare.
best vn of the style (spooky girlfriend ) i have played amazing game the art 11/10 too
Thank for the compliment! I recommend playing “sucker for love” if you like this one, this game still needs a lot of improvement.
this game is fun asf
Great title!🤣 thx for playing🙏💖
love it can't wait to play more of your games
I can'T wait for next update 🔥🔥🔥
Same but it will probably be a while
Have to say that I’m interested more of making new game and It will most likely take a while.😅
This is my first visual novel , I usually play horror ( 3d games ) , this my first visual novel at start I didn't get it , but when I start to try impress her more and more , I really started to enjoy this. Ur story making is great, how cute she is , really great game , waiting for other game , and can u explain bit Abt worst where scientist are there are any connections between them or it's just a normal ending , whatever thank u very much for publishing this game , fan from Sri Lanka .
I’m glad that this is your first experience and you didn’t disappoint about it! If possible I’ll try to make 3d horror games too so I hope you will try it when it releases!
Brooo you did amazing. Btw are you planning to add more content to this game in the future or something different?
I plan to make my next new game, it will be about vn with obsessive gf(?) with different stories and settings I think.
I absolutely love Mrs's character design, and the overall atmosphere the art-style provides. For a visual novel made only in 7 days, the design is clearly distinguished and is its greatest aspect! I really liked how familiar yet suffocating the room felt thanks to the room design, colour choice and lighting. Not to mention how it makes the "Elephant in the room" pop out more due to her contrasting colours and sharper design, yet she fits in perfectly due to the excellent implementation of lighting. She truly feels like an intruder invading a safe space since she's far more detailed and imposing compared to the rest of the room (as we tend to focus more on what's new in a familiar place, it's a great way to convey our focus by giving the object of interest a greater clarity compared to the rest) A stroke of genius for the small amount of time you had to make the game.
Exploring for the endings, though woefully short, was pretty humorous, and getting to know the characters was interesting enough to keep me engaged. My biggest regret is that we don't get to spend enough time with them due to the game's overall length But it clearly shows that the writer has the potential to engage the reader enough through more than the visuals alone, and I would personally love to see them give it another shot through, maybe , a lengthier game? A sequel perhaps?
I can appreciate the clarity the game provides through the objective presented to us by the "Interest Meter", it can most certainly help readers who are stuck exploring for more endings get a clearer picture of what they're doing wrong / not enough to unlock more dialogue as well as the hints given to us through the gallery and other scenarios. However, I'd personally forgo the meter all the while keeping the hints. There's this underlying sense of Danger ever present in the game, it really adds more to the pressure of wanting to stay alive all the while keeping Mrs entertained and therefore interact with her more before a game over. However, through the Interest Meter, the sense of "Did I say the right thing? Am I doing something wrong?" sort of dissipates since the bar becomes a clear indicator of whether or not you're winning her over, which Also devaluates the written dialogue since you know you did something right/wrong before Mrs says anything.
I can tell you wrote Mrs to be a tease at times, making you feel like you chose the wrong option only to syke you out (which is endearing I love it) but the meter already tells you the results. Though on the other hand, as you play the game more and you see that the interest bar is not quite where you want it to be by the end of the game, it also gives the player that pressuring feeling, maybe frustration that the reader is missing something. Whether that's good or not is left to the reader's interpretation.
From my personal experience, I just so happen to stumble into the "best ending" on my first try and I noticed that you expected the player to go through other options First before discovering it, through the writing. Be wary of what the player/reader can experience before writing ahead, the majority of people might play through the motions that you layed out first, but some jokes may fall flat for those who don't.
I personally liked Ending 3 since it gives plenty of room for a sequel and therefore another shot at character expansion or even development. Not to mention it felt like a more natural way to end the interaction between the characters without having to rush things.
8/10 Visual Novel considering the time limit imposed. I would love to see what you're capable of with more time to cook.
Thank for writing an honest and thoughtful review for my game! I’m glad you like it and think highly for this game. For “interested meter”, I’m not sure either I should keep it or get rid of it next game. I added this feature after many players complained about how hard the game felt at that time so I add it. I’ve already aware that it could spoil the surprise but I can’t think of any better idea for this. After that, I added ending gallery so I’m not sure if interested meter still needs. Maybe I’ll make it so players can toggle it on and off.
Excellent idea, giving the player the Option at a helping hand is a great compromise for those who want it and those who don't need it.
I believe the hints given in the gallery as well as the game-overs are plenty to guide the player into exploring the game without any hand-holding. After-all , this Visual Novel is a Survival Dating game, so death while attempting to rizz up the lady should be expected. Failing while getting to know the character is part of the experience.
Thank you for taking feedback into consideration as you have so far, I can see that you clearly care about your work and are connected to the community you're gathering.
I hope my lengthy reviews aren't too much of a bother to read, I can see plenty of potential out of you and your work thanks to a clearly displayed passion and willingness to experiment. After-all, you say you're more comfortable at drawing than coding or writing, yet you stepped out of that comfort zone so you could bring more Life into your character, and I believe it's paying off.
I will most definitely be around to see your growth in the future and I can't wait to see you evolve as you make more games and write more stories!
Entity this entity that HEar me out on the female player
I’m all ears 👂👂🗣️🗣️
PEAK
PEAK
BRUH why is she so thicc lol! this was the last game i played in my 3ScaryGames valentines day special i just uploaded. it was the BEST GAME i played in there and probably should've made it first. it was very creepy but she keeps you interested haha! well done!
oh and there's chapters to make finding it easy
I’m glad you rated this game so highly, and for why is she so thicc umm… idk cough cough
Thicc is supported !!!
couse why not
excellent...excellent xD